Degreed But Uneducated

This piece at UnHerd by William Deresiewicz pushes a lot of the right buttons:

Some years ago, I taught a course in public writing at the Claremont colleges, the consortium of elite liberal arts institutions in Southern California. My students were juniors or seniors, mostly humanities or social science majors, almost all smart, a couple genuinely brilliant. All, needless to say, were expensively educated and impressively credentialed. I assumed that they’d arrive with a fairly good idea of how to make an argument with an academic context and that I would be teaching them how to apply those skills to a very different set of rhetorical occasions.

What I soon discovered was that none of them had much idea how to make an argument in any context. Nor were they particularly skilled at analysing the arguments of others. They didn’t know how to read; they didn’t know how to write; and they didn’t know how to think.

and his experience is not unique:

These problems weren’t confined to Claremont. Later that same year, in a piece about the differences between the way his students read Shakespeare and the way that students used to, Stephen Greenblatt wrote this:

“Even the highly gifted students in my Shakespeare classes at Harvard are less likely to be touched by the subtle magic of his words than I was so many years ago or than my students were in the 1980s in Berkeley. What has happened? It is not that my students now lack verbal facility… In fact, they write with ease, particularly if the format is casual and resembles the texting and blogging that they do so constantly. The problem is that their engagement with language, their own or Shakespeare’s, often seems surprisingly shallow or tepid.”

Here’s a pretty disheartening statistic:

The whole creaking machine is lubricated by the magic grease of grade inflation. As of the early Sixties, 15% of grades at American colleges and universities fell within the A range. By 2013, the proportion had reached 45%. To paraphrase the joke from the old Soviet Union, students pretend to work, and professors pretend to grade them.

I think he’s wrong in attributing the problem to “wokeism”—I think it goes back farther than that and is more pervasive. Basically, I blame the change on a loss of true literacy in favor of visualcy. Reading and understanding long form written tracts is becoming increasingly rare. Nowadays in order to communicate and foster comprehension you’ve got to have pictures, graphics, charts, and, preferably, videos. So what? (I hear somebody ask.)

The reason it’s important is that reading lengthy texts develops different cognitive skills than short passages, tweets, slogans, memes, etc. Those skills include longer attention spans and abstract reasoning. The present method of communication also cultivates increasingly agonistic expression. I’ve explored this in some detail—you can find my previous posts on this subject under “Visualcy”.

My point here is that everything he’s attributing to “wokeism” can be even more credibly attributed to the decline of true literacy in favor of visualcy and that process has been going on for nearly 60 years, long before many people in the U. S. had even heard of post-modernism. “Wokeism” is at most a contributing factor.

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  • Andy Link

    I agree that visualcy has changed things. I’m not sure it’s necessarily worse on net, however. Regardless, there’s nothing to be done about it.

    WRT to grade inflation, I think that has mostly to do with the business of college and how it has changed. Colleges and universities are giving customers what they want and what they expect for the substantial sums of money they are paying.

  • I’m not sure it’s necessarily worse on net

    I think it’s “worse on net” to the extent that I’m not confident that where we’re headed is compatible with liberal democracy. More like aristocracy or other oligarchy.

  • Andy Link

    I think for that to happen an aristocracy or oligarchy must have control of the medium, and I’m skeptical that will occur.

    Literacy is similar in this respect – the written word was a means of control until technology resulted in mass literacy. Mass literacy still exists. While I do think it’s unfortunate that many fewer grasp linguistic subtleties, I don’t think that’s closely tied with the success or failure of democracy.

    I think a bigger fear is the opposite of oligarchy or aristocracy, in which elites become in thrall to populism

  • bob sykes Link

    We now have two full generations of functionally illiterate teachers and college professors. My wife (retired) is an editor for a refereed journal covering Latin American literature. Many of the authors who submit papers cannot write complete sentences in either English or Spanish. The journal editors, nowadays retired from academia or close to it, spend a great deal of time rewriting submissions so as to make them publishable.

    I think it is Wisconsin that recently passed a law requiring the teaching of cursive to grade school students. Good luck with that. None of the teachers can do cursive either.

    We are not losing a liberal democracy. We are losing competent government.

  • steve Link

    OK Boomer. Seriously, this is sounds pretty much like every old guy yelling at kids to get off the grass. Consider this.

    “When I ask them to write a 10-page paper analyzing a particular web of metaphors”

    OMG, just shoot me dead. I did 4 years in the military and worked for a year before I went back to undergrad. I had been shot at, stabbed and in dozens of physical altercations at work. I had co workers kill themselves and dealt with remains of returned POWs who killed themselves. (They really do sh^t themselves when they hang themselves.) If some A hole had asked me to write such a paper I would have (sort of) politely told them to fu&k off. First year students dont write that kind of nonsense unless the guy is just a little dictator jerk.

    Wokeism? This is a wonderful example of how the term wokeism is meaningless. A noun, a verb, an adjective then wokeism and you can be for or against anything. Its really not just visualcy but the fact that people all communicate differently than they did 40 years ago. People used to write letters. Now they text. This precedes wokeism. For the last 20 years I have had to deal with people who didnt realize that a 2 page, single run on sentence is not the way to communicate. Ask them to invent a new, better mode of ventilation management and they are OK. Write in sentences and paragraphs? No way. Of course this goes both ways. The guy writing this can write nice flowery paragraphs no doubt. Lets ask him to partition his hard drive. Bet that goes well.

    He is correct that kids are not so much taught to learn now but are taught so that they can get into a good college. They then learn how to get into a good grad school. They learn there how to get a good (paying) job. Teaching, and learning, to the test. Lots of test prep courses. Doing just the right extracurriculars. Need to work to help support yourself and family so you dont get a perfect 4.0 or perfect SATs? Forget it.

    Steve

  • the fact that people all communicate differently than they did 40 years ago. People used to write letters. Now they text. This precedes wokeism.

    Very much my point. However, what I think is missing is that the differences in communication produce cognitive differences.

  • steve Link

    Maybe but I dont see any reason to think they are permanent. My guys who need to learn to write do it.

    Steve

  • Zachriel Link

    Some years ago, I taught a course in public writing

    So, students take a class in writing because they want to learn to write. Very strange. It is also very odd that young students appear so ignorant to their teachers.

    Language has changed. Change can be good or bad, or, most usually, both.

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